Need an honest opinion on your story's opening? Reedsy editor Rebecca Heyman returns for First Line Frenzy™ where you can submit your opening sentence for review.
In our live stream this Wednesday, Becca will critique dozens of first lines, giving you her frank opinions and sharing practical steps for improvement. Any writer of fiction or nonfiction can send in an opening line — just register below for instructions on tuning in and submitting your entry.
Chaps and cheers, rocks to roll, gems to find, brothers and sisters, notes to take, walks in the shadows, waiting for the lights in the sky.
Hello, John Jonn, Not Joe Joe, okay, what the fuck, another great day to be alive. So...stats, age, location, how tall, retired or not, what do you do with your time. What would you like to do with your time, at this stage of love, not just looking for sex, need a mind to mind connection, to create new world, to help, the slow, simple and needy, veterans in transit, and their extended family, that is another mountain, I have to climb.
Road trips, and do you like to drive, do you have an RV, plane, or truck, house on the block, just have a little time to share, black, senior babe, creating new worlds, what I want, what I need, and what I would like, spinning tales, writing books, had to stop and say what is up.
Sandy in AZ for weekend
Many kids created, love was true, 25 years of love and devotion, joys and pains.Plenty Of Fish In The Seas, Tricks, Trades, Barter Wits And Charms. Dreams.History Notes, Useful Lessons, Tests Over Time, Sinners And Saints, Faces In Darkness.
Or you a man, mouse, are mobster, hats to wear, roles to play. Bitch with 5 stars, baby boomer, senior alert, no spring chickens.Battles won, houses sold in another state, in of life in mind set. Dirt off your shoes, ashes of last life, married and single sex life. .The start of the race was delayed for a lot longer, than we knew it was going to be.
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